https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YpKa6lHRY9I
A common critique I received regarding my first elevator pitch was that I needed to slow down and be more deliberate with my words like I was giving a speech, which I attempted to improve in this one. Additionally, I tried to emphasize certain words that highlight the unique features of SmartStrength like "research" and "clinically-dosed".
Hey Dirk,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was delivered very smoothly and firmly. I liked that you started out strong and straight to the point. I actually said my "company's" name first, and then went on to deliver the rest of my spiel, but I like how you started with a direct problem and solution, which you also backed by facts. I also like how you finished by enticing the audience with your brand of supplements. Nice work!